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Maggie Spillover, part 3 ローレン・サイ、クリスマスの夜の不思議な物語。


(It’s like Vogue Japan made a trailer for the next Maggie book.)

The last Maggie post became wonky—blogger can only handle so many posts. Thank you all so much for engaging so heartily in conjecture over these characters. It thrills me endlessly!

A jumping off point?—sure. In the previous comment thread, 2B2h asked about the TV series Easy, and my thoughts on 3-act structures: I like Easy because it doesn’t use a structure to force emotional points. It takes the time necessary to get there. I love that. This Maggie series was really about how I could get Max to admit his greatest fear and then bring that to fruition by having Maggie unwittingly doing just that without realizing it, even after she’d done it. And for the reader not to hate her guts. I think I did it (though some of you are angered by her), but it took me 250k words, and without armature. Easy has a slow and voyeuristic style that invests heavily in characters to sell story and I need many more seasons. Or maybe not, sometimes it hurts my stomach to invest in stories like these; I don’t know how you people do it, ha ha.

Other cuckold stories in media I’ve come across recently:

Cujo. Yeah, the one with the dog. That’s a book about a cheating wife and the punishment she wrought. Man, it was a stomach-hurter. I don’t know if you’ve heard of this Stephen King guy, but boy, he’s good.

And the weirdest one?—Backcountry, which is available on Netflix. [SPOILER ALERT] Basically, the most convoluted cuckold story I’ve encountered. Guy takes girl in woods to propose, he over-estimates his camp-craft, they meet a capable Irish guy who is so hung the girl can see his dick from behind while he’s peeing, even though he’s wearing pants (::eyeroll:: what is this?—one of my stories?). Spoiler wariness prevents me from continuing, but I’ll say it’s a horror cuckold story where the cuckold is punished by having his viscera removed by bear claws while he screams hysterically. Boy, and some people think cock-cage stories are extreme …

69 thoughts on “Maggie Spillover, part 3 ローレン・サイ、クリスマスの夜の不思議な物語。

  1. That's ok! Just eager!

  2. Should be live any minute now!

  3. While we wait for the final part to be released I figure I would throw out a topic that may be worth having. Do you read much into Maggie feeling like she may in a “bigger league” based on her experiences with Cole (and Jay)? Will that last? If it doesn't last, will it be Cole that lets her down, or will she realize that Max had treated her how she deserves and come back around? This question is rooted in the premise that Cole, Max, and Maggie are equally good (bad) people, which would obviously influence any of the things people say in this story. For instance, it's hard to imagine anyone would feel like it matters how Cole makes Maggie feel if Cole is, to them, the worst of all assholes.I just think I've seen a lot to demonstrate that Maggie is reaching new levels, that maybe she's becoming more like a (hopefully more benevolent) Carol. However, a lot of this could be a consequence of the newness of what she's experiencing. Everyone is in a surprised state with Maggie, Cole is learning a lot, Max is learning a lot, her roommate just had an awakening, people on campus are taking in new information. What happens when this situation becomes the status quo? I think there will be a karmic leveler for her. Sure she got off to Jess catching her in the act with Cole, what a thrill. What if it happens again? Who cares Maggie? We get it you, you and Cole fuck. She gets to hang around Cole, but how does she explain Max not being around? Then obviously there's mom and dad … “Maggie, why do you get so close to Cole?” Maggie might be experiencing her second “coming down to Earth” moment already with Max taking the ring, the first being Jay's wrath. As that continues, does that change how she sees Cole?I can just as easily see Cole impressing her as the world's view of her continues its evolution. Despite what others may believe, I think he has more potential than Max and I'm not just talking about the main events in our stories. At the risk of repeating myself, I'll just leave it there, but I think Cole and Maggie have a future, as I currently see Cole.

  4. Not sure about her feelings. Its what is perplexing about this story. At least in both lhw series we know the wives had something to gain or desire. What maggie gains or has gained is a mystery to me. Breaking it down furthur i try and figuire out does she genuinely love max..i think she does and she is acting in a manner that she thinks he wants her to. Cole may not be husband material but he is certainly bedroom material. And the the theme seems to be shes not married yet. Also rhe fact that max told her what hurts him but doesnt follow thru with “ouch” when she does.Which also begs the question what does cole have to gain. Is maggie his goal or her parents specifically daddy and his connections. Is it just simply they are just a bunch of kids playing with fire and oops they burned the house down. That may work for max and maggie.but not a player like cole.As i said before i dont care who maggie ends up with(come on prof Carmichael) as long as i can connect the dots. Even if she gets either and we get an epilogue of regret she didnt take the other…I do believe shes in love with max maybe cole willConvince her otherwise.I see cole more selfish in it to win it for himself but he grew to care about maggie. So far maggie has been using cole for sex not affection like with max. Maybe its why kt hasnt communicated with her as maggie was trying to figuire what she wanted.

  5. Not sure about her feelings. Its what is perplexing about this story. At least in both lhw series we know the wives had something to gain or desire. What maggie gains or has gained is a mystery to me. Breaking it down furthur i try and figuire out does she genuinely love max..i think she does and she is acting in a manner that she thinks he wants her to. Cole may not be husband material but he is certainly bedroom material. And the the theme seems to be shes not married yet. Also rhe fact that max told her what hurts him but doesnt follow thru with “ouch” when she does.Which also begs the question what does cole have to gain. Is maggie his goal or her parents specifically daddy and his connections. Is it just simply they are just a bunch of kids playing with fire and oops they burned the house down. That may work for max and maggie.but not a player like cole.As i said before i dont care who maggie ends up with(come on prof Carmichael) as long as i can connect the dots. Even if she gets either and we get an epilogue of regret she didnt take the other…I do believe shes in love with max maybe cole willConvince her otherwise.I see cole more selfish in it to win it for himself but he grew to care about maggie. So far maggie has been using cole for sex not affection like with max. Maybe its why kt hasnt communicated with her as maggie was trying to figuire what she wanted.

  6. Much appreciated thoughts, John! We can always count on you to get the noggin working.Maggie's gains are mysterious, because any gains in confidence she might be experience could be built on faulty foundations and have it all collapse on her. We've seen it already in some senses.Coles gains – good question, I think he is realizing he wants to keep this fun up with Maggie by any means mecessary, and so far he's a one woman man. Still way too early to know if that'll last.One thing I want to disagree on, is I don't think Maggie is looking to Cole solely for sex, I think she is looking for affection from him, too. I think that's one of his appeals to her. Their passion “[run] the gamut” as Maggie says about Cole.

  7. On cole: He didn't start as some one to turn to for affection. And its ok for us to disagree on the point. I dont see the heaetfelt connection between cole and Maggie.. I.see their trysts as raw and purely sexual. I think the more often they do it some affections are traded causing them to move closer. But a great orgasm does not a boyfriend/girlfriend make. I think Cole has finally met someone who he can relate to sexually so has fallen for her. Much like me and wife number one. The sex was so fantastic a person would do anything to keep it. So i think Cole has definite affection for maggie but maggies affection is still rooted in the friend zone(ouch) not romantic zone.Based on Maggie's reaction at the ring pull. I think it was just a very pleasant and sexy naughty game she was playing. But she didnt fully understand the rules and someone got burned. When someone explained when you land on “go to jail”you forfeit important stuff like the ability to move forward.You're right about there being some affections recently just how much cole has wormed his way into her heart. Will depend on what she does after max left. She'll probably be in shock at first than will see her true colors be they team max or team cole. So as far as the great idea to “get it out of her system” before the wedding. Im thinking did she get it out of or into her system. Do you think she can go back to vanila sex after what cole has shown her.

  8. On cole: He didn't start as some one to turn to for affection. And its ok for us to disagree on the point. I dont see the heaetfelt connection between cole and Maggie.. I.see their trysts as raw and purely sexual. I think the more often they do it some affections are traded causing them to move closer. But a great orgasm does not a boyfriend/girlfriend make. I think Cole has finally met someone who he can relate to sexually so has fallen for her. Much like me and wife number one. The sex was so fantastic a person would do anything to keep it. So i think Cole has definite affection for maggie but maggies affection is still rooted in the friend zone(ouch) not romantic zone.Based on Maggie's reaction at the ring pull. I think it was just a very pleasant and sexy naughty game she was playing. But she didnt fully understand the rules and someone got burned. When someone explained when you land on “go to jail”you forfeit important stuff like the ability to move forward.You're right about there being some affections recently just how much cole has wormed his way into her heart. Will depend on what she does after max left. She'll probably be in shock at first than will see her true colors be they team max or team cole. So as far as the great idea to “get it out of her system” before the wedding. Im thinking did she get it out of or into her system. Do you think she can go back to vanila sex after what cole has shown her.

  9. I was gonna say some things then I realized I was rehashing a lot. I need MAWR BOOK!The most original thought I came up with is, a good orgasm does not a boyfriend make, but it is a factor. I think Cole could fall into that middle ground in the vendiogram of love and lust. Because nothing's hotter than a vendiogram. I can definitely see what you're saying about Maggie friend (with benefit) zoning Cole. And she is also possibly (like I said Cole is) confusing lust with legitimate love.

  10. you know what's also hot? Spell checking and editing.Venn diagram*

  11. I don't see the heartfelt connection between Cole and Maggie either. Maggie's infatuation is more based around lust and also the fact that until recently he was unobtainable which made him interesting. The problem for Max is he's now created a scenario for a heartfelt connection to form.They're all different people now — the reasons why Cole likes Maggie, why Maggie likes Cole, why Max likes Maggie, etc, could be different enough now that their relationships could wither away. There's already evidence that Max doesn't like some of the new properties of Maggie. And whether or not he knows it yet, Cole is turning Maggie into a type of girl he won't like either. It's clear that Cole is a believer in monogamy, yet the influence he's had on Maggie to get in her panties has had the opposite influence. It's unclear how much he's noticed this change in Maggie and how much of his affection for her is rooted in his idea of her: the kind, wholesome, shy artsy girl she used to be. Maggie has the most to lose here and she's going to need to decide the kind of person she's going to be in this last book. If she likes what's happening to her, then Cole isn't a long term option. There's definitely still a lot of story to tell and I'm certain there will still be lots to speculate about characters after it's told.

  12. Half and half ..cole turning maggie into something she wasnt and maggie growing into the woman shes becoming. Hard to tell which is worse but both at ths same time …i think we call that life altering.

  13. One of my favorite features of the KT Morrison blog whenever she shows us, the growing word count!KT, is that because you know what you want to write and just realize you need more words to get there, or are you still trying to figure out where its all going at this point?

  14. Thank you!—I just need more words to get there. My outlines are rough, but I have an idea of necessary scenes (whose word counts I tend to underestimate) then as I flesh those scenes out I sometimes like to go into excruciating details, push the corners out, and then the word count balloons! But, yes, I do know where it's all going …

  15. 51,000! Excellent!Now I'm just throwing this out there and no it's not out of self-interest and how dare you presume so, but 25,000 sounds like a good number for the first part of a two part finale ala Eternal/Universe.Just saying …

  16. What a relief that would be for me! Unfortunately the structure of this book doesn't provide good points for a split. It's kind of a single package (at a predicted 54,775 for now)!

  17. That's amazing, please keep it up!

  18. So “Recovering Maggie?” Sounds to me like its Max recovering (or attempting to) Maggie, but it could be Maggie recovering (and rediscovering) herself. Can't wait to read it.

  19. You hit the two thoughts i had on that too, JL!

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